Find What’s Wrong

There’s something seriously amiss with the following sentence:

“She was going down the steps to fetch some food and he came up behind her and stabbed her.”
Found on this page.

Lesson: don’t let colloquialisms and cliches get the best of your sentence. Make each word count!

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